Friday, May 11, 2012

"Beyond the Veil" by Brian Rathbone

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In this short story, Vincent Pels struggles to save his daughter in life and death.
 
begining was great! but seems like middle through the end was completely rushed and was stopped suddenly. Could have been a whole lot bigger and more! Not even short story, like flash there it is and there its done.
 

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